Audience Feedback

1. Do you think the magazine appeals to the relevant audience?
2. Were you able to tell what the target group for our film was?
3. Are there are improvements that could be made to the film?
4. Would you recommend this short film to anyone else if it was ever released in cinemas?
5. Would you be able to relate to the issues raised in this film?
6. Does the film flow appropriately or does it look unrealistic?
7. What improvements should be made to the poster and why?

Anna, Olivia and Abigail
These girls felt that the magazine appealed to the audience because of the font style and the colours on the magazine as well and this made it easy for them to work out which target audience the magazine was aimed for. One improvement they suggested to the film would be to change the font for '2 months later' and try to relate it more to the magazine to show the depth and seriousness of the magazine and film. If these recommendations are followed through then they said that they would recommend the film to other people. All three of them said that they cannot personally relate to the film but they can empathise with the characters' situations and are aware of the storyline within the film. They said that they like the flow of the film and it looks realistic and it has a good storyline to go with it and they believe that the poster does also compliment the magazine and the film and no changes should be made.

Nisha, Sharonjit and Neelam
They believed that the magazine did appeal to its target audience of youths and one way they were able to tell who the target group was through the way that the actors were dressed in the magazine article. This group did not think that any changes should have been made to magazine article and by watching the contents of the film, they said that they would recommend our film to people if it was ever released in cinemas. These girls stated, however, they would not be able to relate to the issues raised in the film and could probably be because this genre of film does not include them in it. The film flowed well along that stated that they felt like they knew about what scene would be next and the intensity of that scene. When it came to the poster they said that we should leave it the way it is.

Nayib, Gurdeep and Isaac
These boys said that the magazine is relevant to the film because the setting and the lighting of the magazine links to the film which implies intensity, misery and intensity. They said that through this they were able to tell what genre the film was because of the typical stereotypes associated with the characters and the contents of the film. The sound in the film is something that could be improved as they said that is should be faded in rather than coming in unexpectedly. They would also recommend the film to people if it was ever released in cinemas because they themselves have sort of been able to relate to the contents of the film. Regardless of the minor changes they suggested they do think that the film flows appropriately and another change they suggested was to the poster and they feel that the change should be the font on the title of the poster.

Manisha, Carendeep and Aynsley
They thought that the magazine appealed to its relevant target audience and they were able to tell what the target group for all of the products are. They didn't think that any changes should be made to the film and it would be a film that they would be able to recommend to others if it was released in cinemas. They also felt that they wouldn't be able to personally relate to the issues raised in the film but that others could. They felt that the flow of the film was appropriate and was realistic and was something that relates to current issues in today's society. They also felt that no changes needed to be made to the poster.

Sonia, Qasim and Komal
They also believed that the magazine appealed to its relevant target audience and they were also able to identify the specific target group for the magazine review and the film. They felt that there were no changes that needed to be made to the film and it is something that they would recommend to the right people if it was released in cinemas. They couldn't personally relate to the contents of the film but they could see how others would be able to do so. They felt that the way the film was edited flowed really well and that when it came to the poster there was no changes that needed to be made.

All groups felt that our magazine related to the film and no changes needed to be made to it. A couple of changes were recommended for the poster and the film and if these changes are possible then they will be made and if it improves the current state of the work then these recommendations will be kept.